Why family important?

Family is important because, you have mom or dad with your brother, sister will help you and always be next to you, help you learn, know more about the world.

Feedback Sandwich

I speaking with metional
I did not improve more color in to my picture
I saying loudly and clearly

Improve goal

I need to speak loudly and speak clear, that will make my speech got interesting and awesome

feedback sandwich

I need to speak aloud and clear
colorful and awesome picture
reading more detail about my speech